2013年11月10日 星期日

Main Body

Main idea 1:
Topic sentence: This summer vacation I got a chance to go on a volunteer trip to Sri Lanka and I really learn many things.

Supporting sentences: In Sri Lanka I learned love, thankful and possitive.

Example: three short stories

Main idea 2:
Topic sentence: Because of these lesson in Sri Lanka, I gained some changes.

Supporting sentences: Now I am braver, I am more thankful and I tried to show my love.

I can't think of the third part. I would talk to teacher on Tuesday.

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